One More Time

The step-by-step photos of the one on the right just weren't translating into anything you could make sense of, so the colours on the left were chosen to be more visible. I think it works although the seed beads are ever so slightly shorter which didn't seem to work as well while I was stitching it, though ultimately there's little difference. It might be more difficult to stitch tightly with smaller beads though.

Also I had to do it again to see if it's really that confusing, and it might be, but I think I can mitigate that in the instructions with judicious use of arrows and other devices.